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This template represents a patient's occupations, lifestyle, and environmental health risk factors.
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This template represents a patient's job as occupation and industry, lifestyle, and environmental health risk factors.

2)
The link to "occupational data" has errors, e.g., it includes both http and https. Correct to Occupational Data for Health (ODH). This should not be referred to as just "occupational data," because that contributes to a lot of confusion around what "occupation" and "occupational health" refer to. If ODH is unsatisfactory we will work with you to find something we can all agree on.