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  1. Other Specification Feedback
  2. OTHER-2286

recommended word smithing clarifications

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    • Problem-Oriented Health Record (POHR) (OTHER)
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      Resulting edit: "The system MAY provide ability to capture, maintain and render the goals associated with a problem."

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      Resulting edit: "The system MAY provide ability to capture, maintain and render the goals associated with a problem."
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      Existing wording:

      The system MAY provide ability to capture, maintain and render the goals associated with a the problem. (item 6)

      Proposed wording:

      The system MAY provide the ability to capture, maintain and render the goals associated with a the problem

      Comment:

      word choices for clarification-the last segment could be "a problem" or "the problem"

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