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  1. FHIR Specification Feedback
  2. FHIR-38392

Paralled construction of bulleted list

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    • Resolution: Persuasive
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    • At-Home In-Vitro Test Report (FHIR)
    • 1.0.0-ballot
    • Orders & Observations
    • Workflow
    • 5.1
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      Will update bullet as suggested and add wording to the first: "manually entered into a mobile device app".

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      Will update bullet as suggested and add wording to the first: "manually entered into a mobile device app".
    • Sarah Gaunt / Elliot Silver : 10 - 0 - 1
    • Clarification
    • Non-substantive

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      • Bullet points should use parallel construction.
      • Are these exact items the only two options, or are they examples of options?

      Existing Wording:

      The test result is then either:

      manually entered
      a mobile device app scans an analyzes the strip and captures demographic patient data.

      Proposed Wording:

      The test result is then either:

      • manually entered into a ???, or
      • scanned into a mobile app that analyses the test strip and captures demographic patient data.

      (Comment 17 - imported by: Ron G. Parker)

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            minigrrl Sarah Gaunt
            esilver Elliot Silver
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