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  1. FHIR Specification Feedback
  2. FHIR-38386

Multiple issues with FHIR Bundle Resource section

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    • 1.0.0-ballot
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      • Will remove extra quote in "ask at "order"
      • "Sending a set of resources as part of a message exchange" does appear on the Resource Bundle link (under 2.36.1 Scope and Usage), which then references the Messaging link - though that sentence is not on the Messaging page. Will remove the Messaging link as it's on the linked Bundle page. Will rewrite as "As outlined in the Scope and Usage section of the Resource Bundle, the primary “bundling” function for this use case is “Sending a set of resources as part of a message exchange."
      • "see Messaging[])" was copied from the text on the Resource Bundle page - removing link based on re-write above.
      • Removing sentence containing "instructions" based on re-write above and it seems redundant when we are specifying what to put in the bundle and the message etc.
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      Will remove extra quote in "ask at "order" "Sending a set of resources as part of a message exchange" does appear on the Resource Bundle link (under 2.36.1 Scope and Usage), which then references the Messaging link - though that sentence is not on the Messaging page. Will remove the Messaging link as it's on the linked Bundle page. Will rewrite as "As outlined in the Scope and Usage section of the Resource Bundle , the primary “bundling” function for this use case is “Sending a set of resources as part of a message exchange." "see Messaging[])" was copied from the text on the Resource Bundle page - removing link based on re-write above. Removing sentence containing "instructions" based on re-write above and it seems redundant when we are specifying what to put in the bundle and the message etc.
    • Sarah Gaunt / Elliot Silver : 17 - 3 - 0
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      • Remove extra quote in "as at "order"
      • I expect to see the phrase "Sending a set of resources a part of a message exchange" on either the messaging link or the resource bundle link. That phrase doesn't appear on either. Use a term that appears on the target link so that readers can find the desired content.
      • Is "(see Messaging [])" supposed to be inside the quotes (as part of the bundle function name) or outside the quotes (as a place to look to find that function name)? Correct if necessary. Add closing period to sentence; if last character is a quote, period usually is placed inside quote.
      • Why is "Instructions" capitalized? Also, the linked page doesn't give "instructions," it is just the Bundle page of the standard.

      Existing Wording:

      As such, any resource representing the lab result itself, “ask at “order” (AOE) answers, etc. will need to be packaged together into a Bundle resource. The primary “bundling” function for this use case is for “Sending a set of resources as part of a message exchange (see Messaging)”

      Please see Resource Bundle for detailed Instructions.

      (Comment 11 - imported by: Ron G. Parker)

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            minigrrl Sarah Gaunt
            esilver Elliot Silver
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