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  1. FHIR Specification Feedback
  2. FHIR-29908

Grammar issue (word usage)

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    • Resolution: Persuasive
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    • Situation Awareness for Novel Epidemic Response (FHIR)
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    • Public Health
    • Security Considerations
    • 3.2
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      Change bullet to: Use of encryption with TLS is recommended, using cyphers such as AES256.

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      Add comma, delete second use of word "common"

      Existing Wording:

      Given that common use of TLS includes common use of encryption cyphers such as AES256, this is recommended for consistency sake.

      Proposed Wording:

      Given that, common use of TLS includes common use of encryption cyphers such as AES256, this is recommended for consistency sake.

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            jfltdoc Mark Janczewski
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