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      This sentence is awkward. It looks like someone copy-pasted a valid list, but not an actual complete thought. It is also confusing as placed before Section 2.2.2, which actually defines Situational Awareness and the data needed. I would suggest moving it after the first paragraph in Section 2.2.2 and before Section 2.2.2.1

      Existing Wording:

      Situational Data Needs of Public Health Key situational data needed by public health has remained relatively consistent and well established over this time, and is to support awareness of:

      Proposed Wording:

      Situational data needed by public health agencies and professionals...

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            Karin.frank@cormac-corp.com Karin Frank (Inactive)
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