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Assorted clarifications to background references

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    • Resolution: Persuasive with Modification
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    • Cross Paradigm Gender Harmony - Sex and Gender Representation (OTHER)
    • 1.0.0-ballot
    • Terminology Infrastructure
    • Background
    • 2.1
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      1) Remove redundant "initial". Consider whether earlier work should be characterized as a "ballot" or something else (model? document?).

      original

      In the initial Gender Harmony initial ballot, excerpted below, we noted the following (The original references are replicated here in our Bibliography.)

      new

      In the Gender Harmony initial informative specification from which the entire section below has been excerpted, we noted the following (The original references are replicated here in our Bibliography):

      2) No closing punctuation to opening sentence. Suggest "…we noted the following (referenced sources listed in our Bibliography):" Also link to Bibliography.

      See above

      3) Are the bibliographic references only for content from the GH inital ballot? I think-but am not sure, see next point--that some of the content on this page is new and contains references as well.

      Some of the references are new to this ballot and not in the original informative specification

      4) It isn't clear how much of this page is the excerpted material. Is it only the quote from Rea Carey, the remainder of this sub-section, or the remaineder of the page. Better identify the scope of the excerpt.

      see change in first sentence above. Much of the page is but the first section is exclusively from the initial document. Given that this is not an academic paper, requirements for detailed attribution are not critical. It is very common to pull content from a prior publication of a project into the next IG

      5) Link references throughout to the respective bibliography entry.

      We tried but the FHIR publisher does not respect the ref format.

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      Items: 1) Remove redundant "initial". Consider whether earlier work should be characterized as a "ballot" or something else (model? document?). original In the initial Gender Harmony initial ballot , excerpted below, we noted the following (The original references are replicated here in our Bibliography .) new In the Gender Harmony initial informative specification from which the entire section below has been excerpted, we noted the following (The original references are replicated here in our Bibliography ): 2) No closing punctuation to opening sentence. Suggest "…we noted the following (referenced sources listed in our Bibliography):" Also link to Bibliography. See above 3) Are the bibliographic references only for content from the GH inital ballot? I think-but am not sure, see next point--that some of the content on this page is new and contains references as well. Some of the references are new to this ballot and not in the original informative specification 4) It isn't clear how much of this page is the excerpted material. Is it only the quote from Rea Carey, the remainder of this sub-section, or the remaineder of the page. Better identify the scope of the excerpt. see change in first sentence above. Much of the page is but the first section is exclusively from the initial document. Given that this is not an academic paper, requirements for detailed attribution are not critical. It is very common to pull content from a prior publication of a project into the next IG 5) Link references throughout to the respective bibliography entry. We tried but the FHIR publisher does not respect the ref format.
    • MaryKay McDaniel / Christopher Gracon : 6-0-3
    • Clarification
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      Remove redundant "initial". Consider whether earlier work should be characterized as a "ballot" or something else (model? document?).

      No closing punctuation to opening sentence. Suggest "…we noted the following (referenced sources listed in our Bibliography):" Also link to Bibliography.

      Are the bibliographic references only for content from the GH inital ballot? I think-but am not sure, see next point--that some of the content on this page is new and contains references as well.

      It isn't clear how much of this page is the excerpted material. Is it only the quote from Rea Carey, the remainder of this sub-section, or the remaineder of the page. Better identify the scope of the excerpt.

      Link references throughout to the respective bibliography entry.

      Existing Wording:

      In the initial Gender Harmony initial ballot, excerpted below, we noted the following (The original references are replicated here in our Bibliography.)

      (Comment 7 - imported by: Lloyd McKenzie)

            seanmuir Sean Muir
            Rongparker Ron G. Parker
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