In 2.23.1 Document Content where it says "...followed by a series of other resources, referenced from the Composition resource, that provide supporting evidence for the document.": replace "supporting evidence for" with "the supporting details for". Change "Other resources that these referenced resources refer to may also be included in the bundle if the document construction system chooses to do so. Including these additional resources will make the document bigger but will save applications from needing to retrieve the linked resources if they need them while processing the document. Thus, whether these linked resources should be included or not depends on the implementation environment." to "When these resources reference other resources, the referenced resources SHOULD also be included in the bundle. Omitting referenced resources could compromise the integrity and wholeness of the document, especially when considering that documents have legal retention periods that may be longer than the life of the FHIR server where the reference(s) point to. <NEW PARAGRAPH> In rare cases the referenced resources in Composition can also be contained resources within Composition provided that the resource(s) in question meets the restrictions for the use of contained resources (see http://www.hl7.org/implement/standards/fhir/references.html#contained for more information)." Change "Additional resources can be included in the bundle (e.g. resources referenced from the List that represent the section.content SHOULD be in the bundle, and other additional resources they reference can be included), but these (and any narrative) are not attested content. Specifically, the Composition.attester attests to the presented form of the document." to "Additional resources included in the document that are not part of the presentation of the document are not considered attested content (e.g. a Condition resource)."